WALT: to use punctuation like brackets and ellipses.
WALT: describe setting
A wood crafted thing was hanging from nature and was covered with a net with whistling music in the background and a human cry. There was dark colored furniture with bright flowers on the forest floor. I could smell pine and flowers. Dampness from the misty fog was all over my
body.
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