Lone robot

WALT: describe the setting

Suddenly he saw a puff of smoke in the bush and it was train. He jumped in it and went to sleep. Then he hopped out and clatted around the building suddenly bright lights came towards him. then it drifted to the left and the metal creature jumped to the right. Then he looked at his sticker on his metal body he looked up and it was the same image on his body.

Girl on a string

WALT: use punctuation like brackets and ellipsis

She was hanging by cotton and swooping through the air like a plane. Her dress was like a flag blowing in the wind. the mountains were just below her that she could just about touch the top.

the mountains were so big she had to swoop from side to side so she wouldn't fly in to them. she is that high it’s like skydiving. there is that much air in it she is going up every minute.

Main Stars Alpine survival kit