Hanging bed description By Harrison
WALT: to use punctuation like brackets and ellipses.
WALT: describe setting
A wood crafted thing was hanging from nature and was covered with a net with whistling music in the background and a human cry. There was dark colored furniture with bright flowers on the forest floor. I could smell pine and flowers. Dampness from the misty fog was all over my body.
awesome powerful words in there we are working on having powerful words in our stories in I have a new post on my blog called show dont tell sentences
ReplyDelete