Thursday 11 September 2014

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WALT: describe characters and setting in an interesting way.


It was a cold night as the boy was outside cooking marshmallows. Until he hears a stick snap and then a loud thump. He then screams for help and sassy runs away back into the forest. he then sees his parents and tells them what he saw then his dad runs to the fire and puts it out his mum and dad walks back inside with the boy that was cooking marshmallows and he then sees the sassy again and this time the sassy talks and says I  was just wanting the marshmallows he drops the bag of marshmallows and runs inside and then sassy helps himself to the bag of marshmallows and sassy is always on watch for marshmallows. So the boy went to bed and then he heard a thump underneath his bed he looked under his bed and then sassy rushed out from under the bed and into the closet he got out of bed and saw sassy with his marshmallows the boy then says give me my marshmallows and then sassy says why. because they are mine said the boy. So then sassy gives him the marshmallows. then the boy says you must like marshmallows and sassy says yes I do. And then sassy and the boy become best friends and now they are both cooking marshmallow s every night but one night they hear a thump in the bush and sassy and the boy scream and run back into the house. and eat the marshmallows with the rest of the family.
And now sassy and the boy live happily with marshmallows.
THE END






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