WALT: describe a moment in time
As the tight rope screamed to pull me up I heard a loud noise that came to my face. All I could see is a great big red a yellow object come over the mountain and straight down into to the gully as the noise went down. I rushed back down to the car as I looked over the edge by our car.
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