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She was hanging by cotton and swooping through the air like a plane. Her dress was like a flag blowing in the wind. the mountains were just below her that she could just about touch the top.
the mountains were so big she had to swoop from side to side so she wouldn't fly in to them. she is that high it’s like skydiving. there is that much air in it she is going up every minute.
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